Rough Cut and feedback from fellow students

As you can see, this is our rough cut. The bulk of filming and editing has been done but some minor and some major aspects need to be reviewed and changed/enhanced such as the music at the end of the film turning from minor to major.
This needs to be changed as it doesn't fit with the rest of the film opening and would confuse the audience.

Here are a few comments that people made after watching our rough cut of our film opening;

'I thought the opening was very good and i liked the way the water fades in at the very beginning. It really sets the scene' - Riham Walcott

'I thought it was all cool but the music at the end doesn't make sense to me. it turns from being sad to happy and i didn't really get that.' - India Harley

'I liked the shots of Chloe on the bridge, i thought they were all really scenic and created a very mysterious mood' - Nathaniel Prince

'I don't really understand the connection between the characters. What does Chloe have to do with Cleo and Cameron and why is she so upset? Maybe you could make this clearer in some way.' - Chauntelle Stafford.

Considering the above comments, i feel that we can use the critisisms constructively to improve our film opening. For example, we will definately make it clearer as to how the characters are connecetd. We will do this writing a love letter from Cameron to Chloe.
I think lots can be taken from these comments and we will use them in our group to help us improve the confusing aspects and maintain the positive ones.